Started writing a song during Christmas. Got stuck on the second verse though… Anyone got suggestions?
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The flag still flying and I stand and cheer
D
The red-white-blue that snaps so dear
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In the blowing wind
E
That blows today
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And thinkin' of our soldiers in arms who stand
D
Backed by prayers in a foreign land
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It's because of them
E
I'm free today
G
The life I live in a world of fear
D
When freedom is so strong and near
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My heart is pounding as I sing a song
G D A
Of Ame - ri - ca
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Sing a song
G D A
Of Ame - ri - ca
Schoolkids jumping on the bus in the sunrise
Swallows flying in the clear blue skies
It's another day
In my home town (?)
Farmers plowing in the fields outside... ?
/Refrain/
I don’t like “swallows” in the second part, doesn’t feel really American, more Swedish somehow. Maybe June bugs? Dolly Parton sang about June bugs, but I don’t know if they fly in the “clear blue skies”. May need some major tweaking.
Hmm…it’s wonderful :)
How about changing swallows to….umm…pigeons? We sure have a lot of those ;))